Fix that sentence please. Then, maybe you can message me, and sound like a smart ass.  

My parents have seen me do stunts, and have seen me perform once. With a hip hop team, that was not committed. They didn’t even go for me and missed most of the performance because they were talking. I want them to come watch me perform with Kontagious. That is what I want. And for them to come watch something I choreographed, to show them I can do this. 

Also, my post was about how much I appreciate  my parents. So no I’m not having a pity party.